Post by FinlandiaWhiteEyes on Oct 21, 2012 18:19:01 GMT -5
A Love That Crushes Like a Mace
Prologue: The Bloody Hill
Blood trickles down the streets of Hespeth. Smoke fills the air, swirling lazily into the skies like the clinging tendrils of a vine grown from fire, climbing the buildings of the village and blossoming into clouds. Silence blankets the town more completely than the smoke. Ravens rustle their wings and scrape at the mound of carrion in the town’s centre, but are otherwise eerily quiet. A small dog sits shivering in a frame whose stout oak door has been hacked from its hinges. The onset of dusk leaves the town spangled in fireflies, feeble sparks in a red and grey twilight.
The small dog moves to curl around an equally small, awfully still shape at the base of the newly built hill of Hespeth. The ravens have long since flown to the sturdiest of the caved-in roofs to roost. The sky blackens, and so does the blood staining the streets, the stones, the skin of all that was once a prosperous river town. The chill of the night sees only the dog and the ravens shiver. A wolf in some far-off hunting range lifts his voice in song, a fitting dirge for fallen prey, whether they are his own or not.
Morning at last sees the onset of flies, and the return of the ravens. The little dog snaps and snarls at both, and the ravens snap back at him. He does not let them touch his still playmate. A particularly large and spiteful bird tears a dull brown eye from a socket and tosses it at the dog. The flies nip at him, making his ears bleed, but he still does not move an inch.
The sun rides high in the sky, and the stench burns the thin dog’s nose. He trembles, and then looks up, body tense, as measured, implacable footsteps finally break the unsettled silence.
A tall man comes into view, his face obscured by the body he hauls on his shoulders. He throws the expensively armoured corpse at the foot of the large, stinking pile, so that the man, obviously a soldier, lies before the slaughtered residents of Hespeth like an actor before an indifferent crowd. The small dog growls at this action, but the tall newcomer, whose face is sharply noble and painfully grim, pays no attention. He fingers the hilt of a large sword in a silence as eerie as the one his steps had previously broken. His burning eyes flicker from the bloody mound to his former burden, and his mouth twists in disgust.
Just outside the line of buildings, back the way this tall figure has come from, a harsh female voice breaks this new, angrier silence.
“The more things change, the more they stay the same. Mankind is truly a pitiful creature.”
The man lifts his huge sword and plunges it through the armoured chest, once, twice, three times. The harsh voice speaks again.
“We’re wasting time. Come. Your own pile of corpses is looking pitifully small. Let us continue your quest for justice.” The man snorts, and the female voice responds, sounding amused. “I know you merely wish to add to the bloody hill, Caim. That was precisely my point. You can only crusade with the edge of a blade. I wouldn’t ask otherwise. Come now!”
The dog leaps up and begins to bark. The man, Caim, leaves the once-town of Helspeth to its corpses and its flies. The ravens start to argue over entrails.
Far away, a general dances to the melodic giggling of a baby.
Far, far away, a little girl burns a marionette instead of cutting the strings; an ancient dragon sharpens a plain knife with one long claw; and a beautiful enchantress curses her mother and rides savagely into an oncoming rainstorm.
The sun begins to fall in this world, and rise in another.
((New folks: Welcome! Old RPers: Welcome Back! So, this is the long overdue retelling of the ALTCLAM story, hopefully in its entirety, in the form of a sort of novel thingy. The plan is to post chunks every weekend. This is a little prologue to get you back into the...unusual mood of the world. Feedback and the like is welcome in the other thread in this section. Grazie, and enjoy.))
Prologue: The Bloody Hill
Blood trickles down the streets of Hespeth. Smoke fills the air, swirling lazily into the skies like the clinging tendrils of a vine grown from fire, climbing the buildings of the village and blossoming into clouds. Silence blankets the town more completely than the smoke. Ravens rustle their wings and scrape at the mound of carrion in the town’s centre, but are otherwise eerily quiet. A small dog sits shivering in a frame whose stout oak door has been hacked from its hinges. The onset of dusk leaves the town spangled in fireflies, feeble sparks in a red and grey twilight.
The small dog moves to curl around an equally small, awfully still shape at the base of the newly built hill of Hespeth. The ravens have long since flown to the sturdiest of the caved-in roofs to roost. The sky blackens, and so does the blood staining the streets, the stones, the skin of all that was once a prosperous river town. The chill of the night sees only the dog and the ravens shiver. A wolf in some far-off hunting range lifts his voice in song, a fitting dirge for fallen prey, whether they are his own or not.
Morning at last sees the onset of flies, and the return of the ravens. The little dog snaps and snarls at both, and the ravens snap back at him. He does not let them touch his still playmate. A particularly large and spiteful bird tears a dull brown eye from a socket and tosses it at the dog. The flies nip at him, making his ears bleed, but he still does not move an inch.
The sun rides high in the sky, and the stench burns the thin dog’s nose. He trembles, and then looks up, body tense, as measured, implacable footsteps finally break the unsettled silence.
A tall man comes into view, his face obscured by the body he hauls on his shoulders. He throws the expensively armoured corpse at the foot of the large, stinking pile, so that the man, obviously a soldier, lies before the slaughtered residents of Hespeth like an actor before an indifferent crowd. The small dog growls at this action, but the tall newcomer, whose face is sharply noble and painfully grim, pays no attention. He fingers the hilt of a large sword in a silence as eerie as the one his steps had previously broken. His burning eyes flicker from the bloody mound to his former burden, and his mouth twists in disgust.
Just outside the line of buildings, back the way this tall figure has come from, a harsh female voice breaks this new, angrier silence.
“The more things change, the more they stay the same. Mankind is truly a pitiful creature.”
The man lifts his huge sword and plunges it through the armoured chest, once, twice, three times. The harsh voice speaks again.
“We’re wasting time. Come. Your own pile of corpses is looking pitifully small. Let us continue your quest for justice.” The man snorts, and the female voice responds, sounding amused. “I know you merely wish to add to the bloody hill, Caim. That was precisely my point. You can only crusade with the edge of a blade. I wouldn’t ask otherwise. Come now!”
The dog leaps up and begins to bark. The man, Caim, leaves the once-town of Helspeth to its corpses and its flies. The ravens start to argue over entrails.
Far away, a general dances to the melodic giggling of a baby.
Far, far away, a little girl burns a marionette instead of cutting the strings; an ancient dragon sharpens a plain knife with one long claw; and a beautiful enchantress curses her mother and rides savagely into an oncoming rainstorm.
The sun begins to fall in this world, and rise in another.
((New folks: Welcome! Old RPers: Welcome Back! So, this is the long overdue retelling of the ALTCLAM story, hopefully in its entirety, in the form of a sort of novel thingy. The plan is to post chunks every weekend. This is a little prologue to get you back into the...unusual mood of the world. Feedback and the like is welcome in the other thread in this section. Grazie, and enjoy.))